Training Grounds.Kayos Gaiden


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Stan

07/15/2016

where the kids go…

  • Stan

    07/15/2016 at 12:00pm

    Thanks for the comment. As things are now I have 10 chapter done already. As I go along the way I am making adjustments to dialogue for a better reading experience. The boob thing for you is a personal preference so understood as there are characters with next to none hope you find you pick amongst them. Please ignore Titan sphere as Kayos gaiden is a prequel and separate work set in the same world. I am searching for a colorist for the other chapters which I have been unsuccessful so black and white stays for now until I find a successful candidate I can pay. This is only chapter 3 and things do get better along the way.

    • athdlg

      07/15/2016 at 12:48pm

      Most of what I said is more of a personal preference, so I wouldn’t believe it would be taken into serious consideration. As for characters with next to nothing chests possibly being my preference, that’s not necessarily the personal issue that I have. More or less it’s how it’s drawn. It’s a good thing you gave me that heads up about that prequel! I was a little confused as to what was happening from there to now but I assumed that there were reasons beyond my knowledge. Hope to see more from you and maybe you’ll find that colorist you’ve been looking for.

  • athdlg

    07/15/2016 at 8:39am

    Impressions and feelings after reading everything:
    The proportion of characters irks me quite a bit, but I can still read it because there is a lot of detail and that makes me happy. Sometimes the said details can be a bit much or unneeded, but that’s only because the shading is near to nothing now except for hatches. I also really don’t like the boobs.
    Dialogue feels incredibly cringe-worthy and forced or unnatural many of the times.
    The plot currently feels extremely ‘Naruto’ mixed with a flare of weeaboo.
    However, I am interested in the plot and I’m curious to where it will lead, so I’ll continue reading for now.

    While I like how frequently this is getting updated, do you have that many pages to spare per week while also drawing more along the way? I know you said you had ten chapters done already–maybe I misunderstood.

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