ok...here is the new version after a butt load of tweeking and adjusting
i hope you all find it to be acceptable
Name: Yuki Alena
Teacher or Student: Student/Delinquent
Weapons: staff, earth element (rocks, sand, and mineral)
Class/Race: Earth mage/Demon
Personality: Usually a joyful little girl when she’s around people she knows. Otherwise she is very shy and won’t start conversations on her own, but perfectly content with just sitting there and doodling. Being sheltered most of her life she is not to good with people, sometimes misunderstanding if someone is complimenting her or insulting her. She is very opinionated and says what she thinks on the subject even if it’s not needed. Holds a grudge very easily and it goes as far as her sometimes researching a way to torture you horribly.
Appearance: Yuki stands at 5 feet 4 inches and weighs 119 pounds. With lightly tanned skin, green eyes, and dark brown hair that barely reaches the bottom of her shoulder blades. Often seen wearing a black tank top with a white playful cartoon skull design; a red and black sweater/jacket with a skull on the back and another just above her heart; pleated red and black checkered skirt that hangs down from her waist to the middle of her thigh. Lastly she also wears an emerald necklace around her neck.
History: Born to a rich warrior dominated family she was always being watched. When Yuki was old enough she learned how to use a variety of weapons. She never really enjoyed the training so she got out of it as many times as she could. She would escape to the giant court yard on the east side of their home; this is where she learned she had a knack for earth magic. Even though she may have gotten away from the teacher she was still being watched by the agents that are assigned to guard her. Once her parents found out they were disappointed, yet surprised at the same time. They have never had a mage in the family before. Her father decided to give up on teaching her to use a sword and give her a staff instead. From that moment on she was destined to be an earth mage, and she practiced every day with joy. The guards often told stories about her raising rock walls from the ground around her with the flick of her wrist.
Once she learned of this school that was opening she begged and pleaded for them to let her enroll. But her parents refused to let her go beyond the walls of their home. So she pulled out her secret weapon, she gave her father the puppy dog eyes and he caved. He said he would see if they would accept her into their school.
Reason for attending: Wishes to become the best mage her parents have seen through the training at this school and hoping to make some friends outside the walls of her home.