I'm gonna drop out of the RP. Later folks.

Aw, whaiii?

Ro's leaving is his own decision, and his reasons do not need to be publicly divulged.

I know I've been saying the chapter will end for, like, ever, now, but we're creeping closer.

The chapter will end once the following three things have happened:
*Melissa leaves the two Glasswalkers
*Victor and Arietta get to Lillian's place
*The Changelings make their last posts.

Fell, you may post if you wish, or we can just gloss over what's left of your interaction with Marie in PMs.


For those of you with characters who can be active during the daytime, you may write a small synopsis of what they did during the day at the beginning of the next chapter, but for the most part, the game will be taking place at night. Also note that if you stayed up all night, you're probably going to sleep late into the day, and won't have a lot of time to do things while the sun shines.



C&C may be posted any time, starting NOW. Please note, though, that I may withhold some portion of EXP for those that don't give C&C to others (not all, of course, but some, and emphasis on may), since you will be inhibiting potential growth by not providing a valuable asset.

I think it's probably okay to just skip forward for our group, unless Jay wants to post something.

Kay. I will go ahead and speak to Jay about that.

As well, if the changelings or the Glasswalkers don't want to post, just tell me, and I will narrate the end of everything, perhaps shaving a few days off the IRL time for chapter end, ehehehe....

Bleh, finally posted. Not exactly my best post, but meh...the scene had to end anyways. I bet everyone here saw the toast coming, I mean this is Poppy after all xD

So yeah...Happy Halloween everyone?

okay. Don't think vince'll do much anyway, so no need to post. Will just try to do the whole "leaving Enters a note" thingy during the day.

*struggles to read everything for C&C*

Whoo Chapter end soon! I'm finishing up reading through everything and should have C&C up tonight or tomorrow, only have one group left to read then everyone will be written and posted and all that.

And now for the fun part, what will pepper look like tomorrow!

I'll start C&C

Player C&C

Name of the person you're C&Cing: Bob
Something you really liked about their playing: I liked how your post had his presence in every word you wrote. His addiction to nicotine made me giggle. I also enjoyed how you interacted with all of the other characters at the rose apartments when you could have very well only interacted with Shadows.
Something you feel they can improve upon: While it is a smart idea to stick together, I feel it needs to be noted that mortals aren't aware of all the icky supernatural stuff, and I'm curious as to if he was a little quick to try and stick together when there was more than one lead to follow.

Name of the person you're C&Cing: couch
Something you really liked about their playing: I liked how, while he seemed to be the quieter PI in my eyes, he still had a very separate identity from his partner. You played his flaws well.
Something you feel they can improve upon: I would like to see as time goes on his loyalty come into affect, be it growing new bonds or old ones needing to be saved.

Name of the person you're C&Cing:Fell
Something you really liked about their playing: I like the description and "fluff" that went into your post. It painted a beautiful picture that came easily to mind.
Something you feel they can improve upon: I hope to see his Group Enmity come into play.

Name of the person you're C&Cing: Soul
Something you really liked about their playing: I absolutely adored that you called her a fiend! I loved her nervousness about the situation too.
Something you feel they can improve upon: I cant wait to see her interact with other players, and this being the first chapter I'm sure it will come.

Name of the person you're C&Cing:Cas
Something you really liked about their playing: I liked how you explained his movements, you played a quiet character perfectly. You did not just interact with Deena, since she is the one you talk to, but you interacted with all of the others too.
Something you feel they can improve upon: I would like to see him grow a little more trusting of the people the Prince of the city sent to protect you both. If you cant trust the prince, who can you trust?

Name of the person you're C&Cing:Deena
Something you really liked about their playing: She is wonderful! I liked how she was bitter about not being able to grow up, and how she clung to Vincent.
Something you feel they can improve upon: I hope that, with the way that you have played her so far, she becomes attached to some of the women in the city.

Name of the person you're C&Cing: Jay
Something you really liked about their playing: I love how oblivious she is! I enjoy her happy go lucky appearance and how determined she was to find her friend.
Something you feel they can improve upon: You did amazing at playing her and it's rather hard to find something to suggest as an improvement. The one thing, looking at you CS, that I did not see that is there is her compulsion. It's a silly little thing to suggest improvement for but its about the only thing I can find so far.

Name of the person you're C&Cing: Neo
Something you really liked about their playing: I think you did well with seeming unsure of how to act as a new hunter. I hope to see him grow stronger as hunter as the game goes on.
Something you feel they can improve upon: I didn’t quite see his love for puzzles that a Decoder naturally has, and I would love to see that side of him shine through.

Name of the person you're C&Cing: Karo
Something you really liked about their playing: I loved the accent and his obvious love for art. I also enjoyed that he went to interact with K.C.
Something you feel they can improve upon: Since he came in a little later to the game it's hard for me to find something that can be improved upon. As with a few others I come back to my default of I wish to see him interact with other PC as the game goes on.

Name of the person you're C&Cing: Caim
Something you really liked about their playing: You played his flaws perfectly. When there was a train wreck ready and waiting to happen you kept Vince right on track!
Something you feel they can improve upon: Some of the posts you made just reiterated what the other characters did. Instead of this, maybe try explaining his motions or his feelings on things. Focus on his reactions to the others rather than the others' actions.

Name of the person you're C&Cing: Kem
Something you really liked about their playing:I enjoyed that she opened up some at the end of the chapter. I also was glad to see her "lack of self preservation" didn’t keep her from realizing a dangerous situation for both our characters
Something you feel they can improve upon: In the beginning she started out very lonely. Her entrance (completely ignoring the other two characters, one of which obviously did not belong) was very far into an anti-social spectrum, in my opinion.

Name of the person you're C&Cing: Tsurgi
Something you really liked about their playing: I loved how he kept well to the Shadows I know and love with the PI's. I felt that you handled that situation beautifully and I was giggling the whole way through.
Something you feel they can improve upon: I know it's been a long time (IRL) since they went to Europe but the one thing I remember most from the last session was that Shadows stayed with Angel and Mikey to protect them. He spent the whole time with her, and I felt it was a little too much to be focused so much on spending time with Angel when he spent the whole trip with her. He seemed, in my eyes, a little too upset over the missions for having not honestly been away from her that much.

Name of the person you're C&Cing: Tsuna
Something you really liked about their playing: I love that you choose to have a blind character. There is so much that can be done with this I can't wait to see him expand.
Something you feel they can improve upon: With that being said, I would like to see a little more descriptions in your post. Yes he is blind but there are other senses he can rely on, it is very important to have action as well as communication, epically when one sense is disabled.

Name of the person you're C&Cing:Mastermind
Something you really liked about their playing: I loved that while he kept to his Nocker ways, he wasn’t a cheese grater against my soul. I enjoyed his reaction when he found out his reason for being there was to be a student and I liked that his purposes as he claims it is " to save lives".
Something you feel they can improve upon: I cannot wait to see soft-hearted come into effect, as well as honeyed tounge. His merits and flaws will be intereksting to see played out. I will be waiting to see what type of job he shoots for and to see how well it wors out for him

Name of the person you're C&Cing: Sam4books
Something you really liked about their playing: He defiantly likes his beer. He seems to be very friendly and rather trusting when it comes to people he's just met.
Something you feel they can improve upon: I would like to see a little more about him than just his drinking. I know that with an addiction (3) it is a very big part of his life but even alcoholics have a sense of being more than just their addictions.

Name of the person you're C&Cing: Arune
Something you really liked about their playing: I loved how he reacted to having her fate on his shoulders, and yay for demeanor change!
Something you feel they can improve upon: While it was necessary for the demeanor change to happen I would like to see him interact with the other players in this next chapter.

Name of the person you're C&Cing:Yumeko
Something you really liked about their playing: I like that you had a lot of description in your post and i enjoyed the interaction between her and Setzer. I think you played the judge in her well.
Something you feel they can improve upon: I was surprised to see her nature as Curmudgeon. While I picked up on what I thought was just uneasiness at the lack of introduction. I guess I missed the cynicism.

GM C&C
What was your favorite part of the chapter? I personally enjoyed the interaction between the PI and Shadows. It was quite entertaining to see the roundabout and loose answers being given. It was quite fun to read.
Who was your favorite NPC this chapter, and why? This is a toss us today. The fight is between Felix whom I always adore, and Atemida. I saw a new side of him that has been lacking in that relationship and I felt that I grew and I was very happy for that so I suppose today it has to go to Atemida.
Is there anything you feel the GM staff can improve upon? I think the GM Staff did very well this chapter to help it more forward even if there were slow parts. Which would be the one thing I wish we could improve upon as a group. I know that life gets in the way but a week an a half to post is a little long, no? I may be exaggerating a little but there was times that it was a very long time before some posted and I wish that could be worked on.
Is there anything you would like to see come up in the game? EVERYTHING! I love this game and I'm excited to have it back. With more people there are more things to do, people to see, and fun to have to had, and I'm super excited about the events unfolding before my eyes.

Cheer's every one to a wonderful first chapter and more to come!

Eh I'll let you do the narrative Hana I really can't think about anything to post

Aw, I thought making her smoke a cigarette candy was pretty good xD

Did i miss that? *has to go back and look now* aww poo that will get rid of my improvement XP

Hmm...I'll try the improvement suggestion. It'll be a challenge but I'll try it, my characters tend to show other sides of them as Rp's progress anyways. Good thing I like challenges.

Don't worry, I'll give ya a grand show.

Marie’s last words there made a pretty appropriate finishing line, so hit me with a PM about how you want things to have gone after that point.

I’ll post up my thoughts on some people’s posting once I’ve found the time to go back and re-read a few pages. Oh, and firefaux, I’m hoping I get the chance to work the Enmity into things, too xD. I should probably talk to the PC Pooka amongst us about that.

Alrighty, then. I shall post and wrap things up soon. I just have to get all my pre-set files in order and make sure I have all my PMs written out.

The quieter of the two? It kind of surprises me that he came off that way since he wasn't exactly meant to be. As for the improvement I'd like to explore the other aspects of Marshal as well. Hopefully I'll be able to get a bit more into that once he gets introduced to some more characters, and the plot proper.

GM C&C
What was your favorite part of the chapter?
Easily, mucking about the interview with Shadows. Sure, getting information out of him was like pulling teeth, but it was fun.
Who was your favorite NPC this chapter, and why?
I’m going to give it up to our mysterious villain. Sure he’s acting on the outskirts of the game at the moment, but he intrigues me so.
Is there anything you feel the GM staff can improve upon?
Not much to say here really. Posts have been nice and prompt, as far as I can see. They seem to be trending shorter, they can’t all be monsters after all, but are always to the point.
Is there anything you would like to see come up in the game?
Nothing specific as of yet. I’m still getting acquainted with the ins and outs of the setting, but I’m quite looking forward to next chapter and seeing what more there is to the story as the plot gets rolling along.

Player C&C
Name of the person you're C&Cing: Sam4books
Something you really liked about their playing: That he was a fun seeking guy, who enjoys a drink or two. Compare to Marcus, He felt like an opposite to him. A very postive outlook towards life in general.
Something you feel they can improve upon: Nothing, I liked how he was.

GM C&C
What was your favorite part of the chapter? I guess, I enjoyed the discussion between the Princess and Marcus. Through I did like the Chemisty between Faith and Marcus, had a laugh or two.
Who was your favorite NPC this chapter, and why? Faith, simply because she pissed Marcus off a lot.
Is there anything you feel the GM staff can improve upon? Nothing much.
Is there anything you would like to see come up in the game? The headmistress, I suspose, a meeting with Bob's and Living's characters, or finding a way to get a job at Elysium, the high tech place like a work study program thing.

Er, wait, for the C&C thing, are we just supposed to do the players were RPed with, or is it everyone? I'm confused now *has the others' C&Cs* ><;

You're supposed to do everyone.

Chapter end post will come soon. I'm wrestling with a personal problem that's taking up most of my brainpower atm.

Note that my C&C, as a GM, is in a different format from player-to-player C&C. Players, please use the format on the first page.


Name: Tsurugi
What I liked: You know I love Shadows. Seeing him get dressed up was rather nice, and I like that he's irritated with all the responsibility being heaped upon him.
What I would like to see: I still think his priorities are a tiny bit skewed, at least where it comes to Angel. I'm glad he waited to leave until he was sure she was safe, and I understand why she wasn't invited along, but a few words to her might have been nice. I'm looking forward to see his reaction to the talk Angel's sister is going to have with him, hehehehe.

Name: Yumeko
What I liked: I loved Jo's aggravation. It shows her fallibility as a human...err, human-ish thing, lol.
What I would like to see: I can't wait to delve into Jo's other side, and have her chat with a couple of the people from the ET.

Name: Firefaux
What I liked: It's really great to see Pepper in action again, and I'm evilly pleased that Claire is breaking Mikey's poor sweet heart, bwahaha!
What I would like to see: Kane's gonna get it from someone, and I think it's going to be beautiful. He needs to be taken down a peg, although I hope it's only a peg and not to far. I do love his assholery. ^_^ We're going to have to discuss Claire's future, derangement-wise, and I really cannot wait to see how Pepper reacts to the PIs and the information they have about her previous life!

Name: Arune
What I liked: D'awwwwwwww! He so cute wif Yume. This was a long time in coming, but you knew it would.
What I would like to see: I am eager to see how he's going to deal with his demeanor switch. You should continue to play the transition, rather than firmly setting him into his new outlook, at least for a little while.

Name: Soulscavenger
What I liked: Poor sweet Viviana. I feel like she's been thrown into a world that she doesn't entirely fit in....and I personally love it. ^_^ I also love how she's starting to make friends with Knuckle Cracka!
What I would like to see: She seems like such a gentle soul...It will be very interesting to see how she deals with this new situation, and being faced with the Sabbat in this town.

Name: Karo
What I liked: I love his slightly flippant nature, and the accent. I am also tickled by the fact that he flirted with K.C. He's actually the first PC to do that. Ever. ^_~
What I would like to see: I want to continue to see the clash of the loner-ish nature with the fact that he has to be around people, especially for his work. I also have a job offer for him that I'll be PMing you.

Name: Jay
What I liked: I love Lucy! *chuckles* She's cute, she's impractical...It's awesome. It's going to be so much fun to put her into different situations, because she has such a different viewpoint than most of the other people in this little world.
What I would like to see: I would like to see you post more often. ^_^ If something more important, like school, is keeping you, please just drop me a little note to let me know. Also, I can't wait for her to drop Michel's name, hehehe!

Name: Cascade
What I liked: Oh, Brandon Heat, you smexy thang. *chuckles* Victor is the perfect bodyguard.
What I would like to see: I think he and Saro need to hang out, lololol. I also want to see Victor slip up.

Name: Deena
What I liked: I want to hug and squeeze Arietta and dress her up and never let her go. I love how she's so childish and selfish and jealous, yet cute and totally endearing!
What I would like to see: Personally, I'd love to see her get insanely jealous of Lucy and her connection with Victor, hehehe.

Name: TsunaXionus
What I liked: I liked your initiative, and how you've grown a bit already in descriptiveness. I also got tickled that he got off on making Father Alexander uncomfortable about his blindness.
What I would like to see: I'd like for him to get actually connected with Marie somehow. So far, he hasn't actually mentioned the BBS name to anyone, only muttered it to himself, and so there has been no real connection formed there.

Name: NeoWarrior7
What I liked: I liked the low-key note to your character, and how he's at once sure and unsure about everything that's going on.
What I would like to see: I'm looking forward to his..."internship" with Marie. They're such different people, but they have similar goals. I am very interested to see how he's going to react to her holy-roller Judge-ness. ^_^

Name: BobSagat
What I liked: The PIs tickle me pink! I love the grittiness of their thought processes and how film-noir they are. You guys have really captured a good deal of the feel of the World of Darkness into your characters, and from me, you get the highest praise for that. That they're mortal is just another lovely spice into the big pot of soup!
What I would like to see: I am awaiting their reactions to supernatural happenings with bated breath. It will probably be a little while yet before they witness something, but I occasionally daydream about how they'll react when they do. Hee, hee, hee!

Name: TheLivingCouch
What I liked: The PIs tickle me pink! I love the grittiness of their thought processes and how film-noir they are. You guys have really captured a good deal of the feel of the World of Darkness into your characters, and from me, you get the highest praise for that. That they're mortal is just another lovely spice into the big pot of soup!
What I would like to see: I am awaiting their reactions to supernatural happenings with bated breath. It will probably be a little while yet before they witness something, but I occasionally daydream about how they'll react when they do. Hee, hee, hee!

Name: Mastermind001
What I liked: Your character's a bastardo. I can think of no higher compliment for the player of a Nocker. ^_~
What I would like to see: Your enemy thing will come into play shortly in the future. I look forward to seeing how he will react. Hopefully, it will force him to use contacts and friendship to his advantage.

Name: Sam4books
What I liked: He's so FUN! I also love that he decided to forge an unbreakable friendship with a total ass. *chuckles* It will make for many beautiful Odd Couple moments in the future.
What I would like to see: He needs to meet Megan or Eric. They'd have a blast together!

Name: Fellguarde
What I liked: I really, really, really enjoyed the hidden apprehension because of his inkling about Marie and her posse.
What I would like to see: Post more often?

Name: Kemious
What I liked: The discomfort of her being around people is sadistically pleasing to me.
What I would like to see: Eventually, I would like to see her value others...but that should be a while in coming, after at least one dangerous epiphany. ^_~

Name: Caim
What I liked: I love that he's not quite comfortable in his skin, or with the people at the ET, yet he still presents a fairly confident image, for the most part. I love that he can be sorry for his actions hurting someone else, especially someone who doesn't typically get a lot of care for his feelings (poor Enters...).
What I would like to see: Continue to show the subtle differences in him from the rest of the Garou nation, and don't worry about pissing all that many people off. ^_~

Will get my C&C up as soon as I'm done reading everything in the IC thread. I have to admit, I did skip a lot of people's posts for the fear of getting lost and confused.

I have to agree with you Hana, i let him get a little out of control. I cant wait for his punishment and i will work on keeping him in check. ( oh and i am not making excuses because thats one of the ip rules for c&c you dont make excuses if you choose to respond. Also you know what you left out *pouts* you left out best line!)

I left out all the voting, actually, because most of the players said they didn't think it would be a good idea.